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Wednesday, 8 August 2018

A giant volcano

1 comment:

  1. Hi Calais,
    I really like your descriptive writing about a volcano.
    Do you think you could copy and past your writing from your google doc onto your blog post to make it easier to read?
    Well done.
    Miss Wallis

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